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order_of_chaos ([personal profile] order_of_chaos) wrote2006-11-23 01:49 pm
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Torchwood Drabbles - Handporn I & II

Title: Handporn I & II
Author: [personal profile] order_of_chaos 
Fandom: Torchwood
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 2 x 100
Warning: Written by the same part of my brain that happily writes zombie-porn.


Handporn I

There’s no resistance as Jack takes the Doctor’s hand in his, pressing it to his lips briefly, affectionately, before guiding it downwards.  Fingertips seek out his most sensitive places, cool against his skin as they touch just where he most wants them.  Neck.  Nipples.  Cock.
They leave for a moment, coming back slick to press at the opening to his body.  Jack relaxes to let them in.
It would be even better, Jack thinks, rocking his hips back to slide the Doctor’s fingers further into his ass, if the Doctor were still attached to them.  But this is good, too.


Handporn II

The hand is cold, slick with liquid preservative and salty as Jack sucks the middle finger into his mouth.  It slides in unresistingly, dead between his lips.  Jack squeezes his eyes shut; lets his tongue seek out patterns of finger pads, feeding the curl of arousal that connects his mouth to his cock.
He wants and wants, and this will never be enough, but… 
He suckles harder, moans again – harsh and desperate and closer to broken than he’ll admit even to himself, let alone…
Slipping his own hand into his pants, he jerks once and comes, shuddering, against his desk.


[identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com 2006-11-24 04:04 am (UTC)(link)
OMG Handporn!! Awesome!

[identity profile] darthhellokitty.livejournal.com 2006-11-24 07:27 am (UTC)(link)
So much to be thankful for...

[identity profile] coffeegirl18.livejournal.com 2006-11-24 03:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooo hand!porn so wrong but right....ok my mind is just gone.

[identity profile] coffeegirl18.livejournal.com 2006-11-24 10:56 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL.

[identity profile] classics-lover.livejournal.com 2006-11-24 03:35 pm (UTC)(link)
That was simultaneously hot, hilarious, wrong and right.

Handp0rn gooooood!

[identity profile] ashteth.livejournal.com 2006-11-25 04:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Other normal people would be weirded out by this.

My first thought? "Zombie-porn? W00t! Where?"

My second thought? "Mmmm... gewd handporn..."

[identity profile] gestalt1.livejournal.com 2006-11-25 05:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay handp0rn!

[identity profile] fredegond.livejournal.com 2006-11-25 08:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Handporn! YAY! I so shouldnt like this but i really do

[identity profile] cassiopaya.livejournal.com 2006-11-26 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
You are so fucked up.

I love you.

You are truly an inspiration!
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[identity profile] trulybloom.livejournal.com 2006-11-26 09:45 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, that is just wrong on so many levels - thanks for sharing!

You know, we all assume that hand once belonged to the Doctor. We assume that Jack believes this, too, and that's why he has the hand, why it means so much to him. But, could he have this hand and not know that the Doctor has regenerated? JB saids that Jack doesn't know what the Doctor looks like now, but then how would he know whom the hand belonged to?
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[personal profile] coneyislandbaby 2006-11-26 11:14 am (UTC)(link)
My theory is that the fingerprints/DNA/whatever don't change with regeneration so Jack /thinks/ it's Nine's hand - and it is in a way.
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[identity profile] trulybloom.livejournal.com 2006-11-26 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
So, do you think Jack knows about Gallifraian regeneration? Or do you think he now believes that the doctor is running around still looking like Nine, but short a hand?

I'm super curious to know how they're going to handle this when they finally do!
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[personal profile] coneyislandbaby 2006-11-26 11:16 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh how very deliciously wrong and lovely.

[identity profile] sasskitten.livejournal.com 2006-11-27 04:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much for sharing the hand porn :)

[identity profile] neyne.livejournal.com 2008-05-11 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
ooooh handporn. nice!

oooh!

(Anonymous) 2008-08-14 02:03 am (UTC)(link)
This is so wrong for so many reasons but still seems so right!
I really loved it so much that I want to translate this fic into my language. May I post this to the community which I am in?

Re: oooh!

(Anonymous) 2008-09-22 09:32 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm sorry that my reply is late. It's Korean. They all liked your fic! You know, fangirls are the same everywhere in the world:D