order_of_chaos: (Jackcat)
order_of_chaos ([personal profile] order_of_chaos) wrote2008-08-30 02:29 pm

PotC Fic: Deeper than Skin (Sparrington)

Title: Deeper than Skin
Author: [livejournal.com profile] order_of_chaos
Pairing: Sparrington
Disclaimer: I don't own PotC. Which is just as well, really.
Rating: NC-17
Warning: If you don't like zombie porn, it's probably best if you don't read this.
Summary: Jack contemplates James' inner beauty. Zombie porn. One sentence in 185 words.
AN: Written long ago for the prompt "insides" for I don't remember what; polished up today.

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Beauty can’t be only skin deep, Jack thinks – delighting in the times when the curse is half off half on and he can peel the skin away strip by strip in the moonlight, exposing nerve endings sensitive almost past bearing; times when James cries and shudders at every touch, shifting hungrily closer so Jack can plunge his hands deep inside him, tangling in the endless lengths of James’ intestines, then higher, until he can feel James’ heart beating fast and unsteady in his hands; when he can wrap his mouth around the raw flesh of James’ cock and suck, savouring the taste of it hot and pulsing against his tongue until tremors run through James’ body and he has to take hold of his spine to balance him, sucking still harder; times when, at the end, James rasps his name with broken vocal cords before coming apart completely, those green eyes of his fluttering shut over a heartbreakingly sweet smile – and thinks again, because it’s a thought worth thinking twice: beauty can’t be only skin deep, when so much of what’s inside is what matters.


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[identity profile] shrieking-ell.livejournal.com 2008-08-30 02:53 am (UTC)(link)
Perfect and perfectly disturbing. Nice to see someone still writes schmoopy zombie love fic these days

:-)
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[identity profile] spock74.livejournal.com 2008-08-30 03:45 am (UTC)(link)
Holy shit that's messed up. But I love it so much! What hath thou wrought? Whatever it is, it works.

[identity profile] danglingdingle.livejournal.com 2008-08-30 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
...how morbidly beautiful. That was fucked up in all kinds of ways but it's incredibly exciting at the same time. Maybe that's it, love wrought with something unimaginable and it becomes more of both.

I'm glad I clicked the link :)

[identity profile] captsparrow4evr.livejournal.com 2008-08-30 05:21 am (UTC)(link)
I don't know why but it's been ages and ages since I've read some good Sparrington and even longer since I read any great zombie porn!;) I remember reading this (or something like it) once before but it's nice to be reminded of quality work. Thanks for sharing!

[identity profile] tiggothy.livejournal.com 2008-08-30 08:54 am (UTC)(link)
Just the other day, I came across one of Mel's zombie-porn stories, and now this!
<3

[identity profile] kseenaa.livejournal.com 2008-08-30 09:47 am (UTC)(link)
That actually reminds me of a qoute from the Buffy-fandom, said by the slightly insane vampire Drusilla: "Do you love my insides? The parts you can't see?" To this her lover answers: "Eyeballs to entrails, my sweet."

*smirk*

[identity profile] kseenaa.livejournal.com 2008-08-30 11:00 am (UTC)(link)
Yes, that would be Spike giving her that answer. ;-)

[identity profile] kayliemalinza.livejournal.com 2008-08-30 10:49 am (UTC)(link)
Intestines! Platitudes perverted! Zombie Porn!!

::clings::
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[identity profile] mamazano.livejournal.com 2008-08-30 01:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I feel like a neophyte, this is my first ever zombie porn. And somehow it works.

And my ever analytical mind keeps saying, "Well, they must be careful to keep the pertinent parts in the shadows...

[identity profile] arabwel.livejournal.com 2008-08-30 06:06 pm (UTC)(link)
Eeee! Entrails and spines and pr0n and philosphy, o my
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[identity profile] porridgebird.livejournal.com 2008-08-31 12:15 am (UTC)(link)
You rock so hard.

Can I put your stuff on Horizon?
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[identity profile] porridgebird.livejournal.com 2008-08-31 04:00 am (UTC)(link)
WHEE!! I'll need some info from you. Can I email you? (If you don't want to put an addy here, just email me at porridgebird at gmail). Thanks!
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[identity profile] porridgebird.livejournal.com 2008-09-04 03:53 pm (UTC)(link)
I may, and now I can (with your address) :P

Also, I have. Check your email!

[identity profile] snowgrouse.livejournal.com 2008-08-31 11:09 am (UTC)(link)
HOLY FUCKING SHIT, that was hot. And I LOVE huge run-on sentences (I write a lot of those myself), you've hit my kink there. As well as the FISTING! AND ZOMBIE PORN! OH MY GOD! *faints*

p.s. spotted a misspelling: it should be "vocal cords". Chords are to do with music, but it's a common enough mistake, I've done it myself sometimes! But holy fucking shiiiiiit, this is of the WIN.

[identity profile] nautilusl2.livejournal.com 2008-09-01 12:35 am (UTC)(link)
this is fucking *bangerang* holy cow I love how disturbing and lovely it is. You + zombie porn = FTW

[identity profile] lilfluffykitten.livejournal.com 2008-09-03 08:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Zombie porn, eh? Its been a while, but you really can't beat it (you know, assuming nothing important falls off of course otherwise I'd suppose it could be a little embarrassing).

Twisted yet oh so right...