My pleasure! Any time! ... Actually, it's from my days of doing creative writing at uni and giving feedback - being constructive, etc. Hard habit to break - but maybe a good habit to keep.
I actually think that the rest of the poem *does* imply respect between the three of them, but the 3 lines about sex/possession/power simplifies it a bit. Because even though those three factors may be part of it, it's not *just* that - there's more going on.
Anywho, glad I could help/make you think, etc. ;-) keep it up!
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Date: 2007-01-20 04:53 am (UTC)I actually think that the rest of the poem *does* imply respect between the three of them, but the 3 lines about sex/possession/power simplifies it a bit. Because even though those three factors may be part of it, it's not *just* that - there's more going on.
Anywho, glad I could help/make you think, etc. ;-) keep it up!