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Title: Handporn III - Doctor's POV
Author:[info]order_of_chaos
Characters/Pairing: Tenth Doctor, implied Jack/Hand
Rating: R
Wordcount: 200
AN: For[info]cyberamanda, who said "What if the Doctor could sense or feel what was happening to his hand?" 


Handporn III

He can feel it.  Hot, wet tongue circling the palm of his hand; firm, wet suction as each of his fingers are engulfed in turn – lavished with attention and released with a light, arousing nip of teeth.  Slow, patient teasing that goes on for hours, dizzying, distracting.  He wants to touch, wants desperately to pull his hand away and patch together some semblance of his usual composure – something that doesn’t involve himself with his eyes closed, breath caught on a moan that he refuses to let out – but it’s not his hand to control anymore, and he can’t.  He can only accept the gift of sensation as someone – familiar stranger – lets him feel.  He likes that more than he thinks he should. 
Smooth skin under his hand now – new and bright to fingertips that have barely felt skin before – and he’s fascinated.  Breathless.
Fingerpads linger in the dip of a bellybutton.  Slide down.  Then there’s the velvet-hard heat of a cock pulsing under his touch; warm, wet stickiness and that tongue again, lapping him clean.
He feels everything.  Long after the touch stops on his missing hand, he can still feel it – echoes and aftershocks, and the desire for more.

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Date: 2006-11-26 09:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sam42.livejournal.com
That is so hot and wrong and I love it.

Date: 2006-11-26 09:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moviegrrl.livejournal.com
Oh that's just wrong...
Bloody good though!

Date: 2006-11-26 09:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cyberamanda.livejournal.com
Completely and utterly 'wrong' but we wouldn't be reading it if we found it anything but yummy!

Thank You :-)

Date: 2006-11-26 10:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheepybunbuns.livejournal.com
Oh, yummy!
*bows to you and your smuttyinspiration*

I'm just left wondering what Ten's reaction will be when he sees Jack again (along with teh hand) and makes the connection!

Date: 2006-11-26 11:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ryttu3k.livejournal.com
...Whoa o.o Bring on a reunion!

Hey, what would happen if Jack ever used the hand on Ten?

Date: 2006-11-26 11:24 am (UTC)
ext_19615: Moleskine notebook. (Default)
From: [identity profile] magickaldreamer.livejournal.com
This is about thirty different kinds of wrong, but HOT!

And LJHook picked a fabulous icon for this response.

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From: [identity profile] magickaldreamer.livejournal.com - Date: 2006-11-28 01:14 am (UTC) - Expand

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Date: 2006-11-26 12:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] queen-jude.livejournal.com
So wrong but yet right in a really WRONG way. Love it.

Date: 2006-11-26 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] adafrog.livejournal.com
This was great. heeee!

Date: 2006-11-26 01:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] doctorwhohp.livejournal.com
That was so wrong it was ... yup, still wrong.

but still awesome, and hot. :)

Date: 2006-11-26 02:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jonquil.livejournal.com
Very, VERY nicely done. Sharp, clear descriptions.

Might I persuade you to post in [livejournal.com profile] 3handedjack? It would be much admired...

Date: 2006-11-26 02:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fajrdrako.livejournal.com
Wonderful idea - that the doctor can still feel with that hand. Hot, too. Excellent!

Date: 2006-11-26 04:24 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
lol very yummy! but tmi !

Date: 2006-11-26 05:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] darthhellokitty.livejournal.com
I always wondered what HandSexx felt like to the original owner of the hand! It's like porny phantom limb syndrome. Of course I love it.

That'll resurface in dreams, hopefully not scary ones!

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Date: 2006-11-26 06:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elfinessy.livejournal.com
what an amazing thought....!!! ummmm.... yum.

Date: 2006-11-26 07:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gestalt1.livejournal.com
Oh amazing! Yumm!
Ten likes teh handp0rn!

Date: 2006-11-26 08:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rayaluna.livejournal.com
Meep.

Yes. Very wrong. And strange and hot.

Date: 2006-11-26 08:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oneiriad.livejournal.com
You are a sick, sick person. Please don't ever get better ;-)

Date: 2006-11-27 06:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] coffeegirl18.livejournal.com
So hot and wrong...GUH...I like the idea of Ten still being connected to his hand.

Date: 2006-11-27 04:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sasskitten.livejournal.com
There must be something wrong with me because everyone else commented on how wrong they thought it was except me. I was just thinking "Yes, finally someone wrote Jack molesting the hand!"

Date: 2006-12-01 06:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pervyrobot.livejournal.com
Oh, damn
ultimate hand!porn!

Date: 2006-12-06 07:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xtineebee.livejournal.com
May I add my own "deliciously wrong!" praise to the line? Heh heh heh.

Date: 2006-12-27 12:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kephisos.livejournal.com
Hot, and sick, and hot, and wrong, and still hot.

...Win!

Date: 2007-01-07 10:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bitter-crimson.livejournal.com
Um, yes. VEDY HOT. We thanks you.

OTP, OTP!

Date: 2007-11-28 11:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mad-jaks.livejournal.com
OMG wrong Beautifully written and hot as hell but *wrong*

I fear I may have to read more just emphasise my point...

I do not believe I am using this icon for this

Date: 2007-12-28 04:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] marleeena.livejournal.com
a-fucking-mazing, ayo.
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