PotC Drabble - In which James gives instructions

[order_of_chaos]

Title: In which James gives instructions.
Author: order_of_chaos
Pairing: No names actually mentioned, but intended Sparrington
Rating: NC-17, but only just.
Summary: Dialogue-fic aka. who doesn't think James could make someone come just by talking to them?  Is basically porn.
AN: Comments are loved and appreciated, but if I don't reply to them it's at least partly because I'm in Australia for the next week and a bit.

In which James gives instructions.

Lace your hands together behind your head.  Just like that.  Good.  Keep them there.
No.  Don’t speak yet. 
Or I’ll stop.  You don’t want me to stop, do you?
I thought not. 
Lean back.  The Pearl won’t let you fall.
You’re right, you know.  She is beautiful.  Not more beautiful than you, like this, but still… beautiful. 
Hush.  I told you not to speak.
I won’t let you fall, either.  I’ll just touch you.
And you’ll like it.  Won’t you. 
You want it.
Want my touch.
Crave it.
I could put my hand on you right now, right on your cock, and you’d come, wouldn’t you.
You’d come just from that, all over the cabin floor with me watching.  I’d make you get down on your hands and knees to clean it.  You’d look good like that.  I could pin you down with one hand on the back of your neck and fuck you then and there, so hard you’d feel it for weeks.
You’d like that, wouldn’t you.
I know you would.  Your cock is so hard.  Aching.
Little drops of precome at the end.  I’d like to lick them off you.  Can you picture that?  My tongue licking far too lightly at the tip of your cock.  Picture that.
And maybe I’d suck you.  Slide my mouth right down over your cock and swallow around it.  Can you picture that?
Feel it?
Good.
Now, come.

Comments

[telaryn.livejournal.com]

Wow. I <3 this type of story. Verbal domming is totally one of my bulletproof kinks, and you write it very well. Short, succinct, and believable dialogue.

Wonderful way to start the morning...thank you!

[order_of_chaos]

*grin* You're welcome! Glad you liked it.

[luckystar37.livejournal.com]

*shivers* Niiice.

[classics-lover.livejournal.com]

Oh, my good God in Heaven.

*fans self*

Your James can give me orders any old time he wants!

[arwensong.livejournal.com]

Perfectly done. I could imagine it in that voice...
Hmmmm. Very inspiring.
Gotta sign off now, to um, go do chores, yeah, that's it.
Arwen, hurrying off now.

[order_of_chaos]

*waves* Bye!
Glad you enjoyed it :)

[shrieking-ell.livejournal.com]

mmmmmmm......
James is good

[order_of_chaos]

*grin* James is very good ;)
Thanks for commenting!

[justawench.livejournal.com]

Ooh, I like dominant!Norrington! Very nice!

[order_of_chaos]

Thank you!!

[porridgebird.livejournal.com]

ksjfzoqweoiur *incoherent*

That dialogue? in THAT voice? Could make the Sphinx come.

[elessil.livejournal.com]

With that voice, of course he could. YUM.

[lostwiginity.livejournal.com]

O_O

Y'know what would be fun? Jack and James having phone sex like that. Shame there were no phones back then.

[xzombiexkittenx.livejournal.com]

So Lj ate my comment, which is okay, since I'm pretty sure it was incoherent babble. Normally dialogue like this makes me cringe because it's, well, poo. But holy mother of awesome. This sort of stuff is on my List now. What a wonderful thing to read first thing in the morning. Now I really won't be paying attention in my class today. You, my dear, are still the shit.

[silly-walk.livejournal.com]

Right, so my new life goal is kidnapping Jack Davenport and making him whisper that dialog into a tape recorder for my own personal sexual gratification.

... or maybe he could whisper that in my ear....

... dear sweet mother of god

[prdigal-daugter.livejournal.com]

Oh..My..God...

That was... Oh my god.

*is dead*

[bella-reeve.livejournal.com]

Well that certainly made today better.

Being sick sucks but between reading this fic and getting to watch Coupling (Yay Awkward!Jack Davenport!) I feel better already. Thanks!

[oddorable.livejournal.com]

*squee* I love it wonderful job!

[order_of_chaos]

Yay! *grins* Thank you!

[blackpoetcat.livejournal.com]

Just - WOW *shiver*

[order_of_chaos]

*grin* Thanks!

[pirate4evrnavy2.livejournal.com]

gah...

*chokes on moutain dew*

OMG

*Drops dead from chokeing*

[order_of_chaos]

Thanks!

*sympathises with mountain dew*

Very glad you dropped dead liked it!

*grins cheerfully*

[edoraslass.livejournal.com]

I was completely dead after the first four lines. Holy crap.

[gestalt1.livejournal.com]

WOW! Woah, James is just...
Okay, I'm incoherant.

Sexy voice - wow!

[order_of_chaos]

Glad you liked it! *grins*

[the-dala.livejournal.com]

Damn. Just...damn.

[order_of_chaos]

*grins smugly* Thank you!

[coldryuuza.livejournal.com]

and now just to think of that voiced by jack davenport's voice...
*melts into a puddle of goo*
I am happy.

[order_of_chaos]

*grins* Glad you liked it!
*applies mop and soapy water to goo*

[lilfluffykitten.livejournal.com]

*ooof*

Dialogue-fic aka. who doesn't think James could make someone come just by talking to them?

After reading that? Certainly not me...

excellent stuff...

[teh-farmer.livejournal.com]

GUH.
No, really!

I instantly had JackDav's voice in my head. And BOY is that HOT!!! *melts away*

[jedipirate.livejournal.com]

...How did I miss this the first time 'round?


*dies of voice!porn hotness*

[order_of_chaos]

*smirks*
*buries body in garden*

Thanks!

[anonymiss731.livejournal.com]

*breathing gets shallow*
*feels tense and mouth drops open a bit at "Crave it."*
*adjusts collar*
*takes a much needed sip of soda at "Slide my mouth"*
*soda "accidentally" causes a choking fit at "Now, come."*
I'm suing you for attempted murder!

[order_of_chaos]

You? How are you still alive? I killied you.
Ah well. I guess the more direct methods work best after all.
*stabbity stab STAB*
That should do it.

Thanks! Very glad you found my writing so... effective.